by Ashley Dulin Aug 17, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I close my eyes and take a breath |
by Amanda
long poem but well worth reading to the bottom. Great poem full of talent. Keep writing....... well done :) |
some of it was hard for me to understand, but that's just me! it was good! 4/5 |
by Darien
Your rhymes were good. It was kind of all over the place because there was no structured verse. It was still awesome though. I never really rate people a 4, unless I didn't like it. I believe leaving a comment on hwo to help is good enough. All poetry is good, in their own way. :D |