by stlzhunii420 Aug 17, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
sadness
Now you lay me down to sleep slit my wrist my life not to keep! |
by CrimsonRayne
I like it, its speaks out, and cactches my attention. good job! i really liked the poem. you really do know how to make a poem sound wonderful |
by JL
very different not bad for a first poem! u based it off a prayer rite? w/e its good keep it up! XXXXX |