Wow...great job!!....i wanted to thank you sooooo much for your comments and im glad that you wanna show that one poem to your gf =] and i doubt that even if i write long poems i will ever be as good as you =p your an amazing poet...and yes when i wrote my poem "Concentrate" i was in a selfish mood and didnt want to lose my bf kuz i love him soooo much =] again thnx and keep commenting on my poems kuz i sure will on yours...
~Sandra~