Its dark i must say!! its good though. Keep writing u r good at it!
Juls

Wonderful poem there hun, keep it up and it was fun chatin today:) good luck with your studying,

Love always
Jenn
Hugs and kisses

Wow i love it. so powerful, almost strikes me with fear

That was just too good for words. wowo. that was incredible i gave you a 5/5 wow. keep up the good work.

This is beautifully written keep writing...im waiting for more!

Wowzers.....
good work
=]!

Wonderful loved it only one thing ... Is "retire" suppose to be "retired"?

Its good... if u wanted to make ppl scared.. congrats.. u just did...

Mhmmm yea, your right i may no wanna piss you off. But hell you crush everyone and im all about sweet revenge imagine the kinda team we'd make...again keep up the good work hun

-Nikki-

This is really cool...
i like dark poems alot, and this one is really good!

Very dark. i loved it 5/5

I like the idea of the poem.... "you'll see how the body bag fits" is a great line... its bringsa sarcastic reality and i like it

I love this poem!!!! my favorite part is
'Play with me and you’ll play with fire
Cause I’m the reason the grim reaper retire'
hehe 5/5 !!!!!!

Very dark.
it was suspensefull.
in a good way.
i love your poems.

I love ur many styles..tehy have there own orignalit to it..your poems all have a freshness to em that i cant describe..they dont always rhyme well but they put out a vibe adn an essance abotu them thats hard to describe....that you just cant help but lvoe and want to keep readign more and more...amamzing workk, and amamzing you are.

lissa

Hey Colin .. you have different styles I see

I liked it, very powerfull

Tammi