My song Lyrics

This is my original song lyrics so yeh if you have any ideas just let me know...thanks

I don't know what this means
I don't know why this happened to me and you and everyone
You've seen us,the real us the us we never show
You've seen us, you don't like us so just let us go....
The misery cloud is raining on us
Like dominoes we keep on falling
the misery cloud is raining on us
Is it too late to fake goodbye.... and breathe
Silently taking us down
Killing us softly one by one
The darkness of the night
We are the fakes begging them to take the pain
away so we can finally be free
and then the black of death the red of hell We will finally be free
The misery cloud is raining on us
Like dominoes we keep on falling
the misery cloud is raining on us
Is it too late to fake goodbye.... and breathe

yeh I havn't cwite finished