by AnorexicDream Aug 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
*i know that its really long but please read it all i really like it its one of my favorites by me and if you read it all please note me and tell me what you think. |
by kaiLa
Wow! haha! read it again.. lol |
by kaiLa
Wow!!! it was a really good poem.. i meant great! it had a good flow.. and i do i agree with what u said that (authorities) had to listen and not just brush off people's (especially kid's) complain thinking its just for attention... cos it might end up being true and too late for them to do anything.... |
by pain is me
That was amazing...true story?? you dont have to tell me... |
by "outsider"
WOW you are a great write I have been reading most of your poems and I love them their so true specially this one! |
by Kate
Omg! this is probably one of the best poems i've ever read, and probably one of the most horribly true! it gave me shivers as i read it, and i almost cried. you are a very talented writer, keep up the good work. be the voice of truth! |