Count to ten

by Sinister Soire   Aug 18, 2005


One
They finally pushed me to the edge
Almost to my limit
Testing everything inside
Building up the ledge

Two
Another time in my life
Where it truly becomes hard
Another time of false ambitions
Strengthening the strife

Three
We say honesty is really cherished
But who really tells the truth
No one really thinks about the words
And how the trust has perished

Four
I tell the truth in each word
When I say that I believe
I believe in everything
No matter how absurd

Five
You tell me that you love me
You tell me that you care
I’ll believe you every word
Listen wait and see

Six
My parents proved my views naive
They broke my trust again
They told me that I would get to stay
And now I have to leave

Seven
I’m losing all my life
I’m loosing all my friends
I have no clue how to get on
Without using the knife

Eight
I will never do that again
It’s not the way I am
But they have pushed me way too far
So now I count to ten

Nine
.

Ten
.

idk... i wrote this before i moved... i just found it so im posting

copyright 2005 © Logan brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsey Bosse

    I like the format...it makes it easier to understand and it slows down how fast I know you were thinking so that you really can concentrate on each individual thought...I guess I never realized how really hard it was for you....I'm sorry...so sorry...this is/was hell...

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Baby please don't use the knife again, please please, I beg you. I'm here for you, I always, always will be. I love you SO much angel, you really don't know. *Hugs tightly* This is really sad and touching. :-( I'm so sorry I've done such a shit job at being here for you, I just wish I knew what to say and what to do...I really love you Logan. <3 *hugs* Hold on tight please hun, I'm here for you. xoxox

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarePleasexx

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