Thankyou for the comment, you don't know how much that ment to me. I've never had someone tell me Im talented, actually my teachers seem to think my stuff isnt even worthy or a 65:P but great work on your poem if these are your true feelings you got them across but may I say its not good to distance your self to far.

X0X0X Jenn

nuther gd poem hun but u really shudnt distance yourself so much take care xox

Fantastic poem, like the subject 5/5
oh and jus incase you want to edit it, u put fell, instead of feel. thnx 4 ur comments btw :)

love mark xxx

Outstanding poem. The title surprised me, because most people want someone to take their hand. But the way you used it was perfect. Determined to make it on your own. Great job!