by Cherisa Aug 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I Like him if only he knew, |
by Falling Up
I loved your poems.. the only thing i would change about this one is the last line " for that guy to like me some way." i would change it to " for that guy to like me the same way" it makes more sense, but i still loved it, keep it up and please rate mine too! thankya |