I think by editing this poem you can place it where you'd like it, thats what I do because it does that to me all the time...
Anyways this poem was...WOW! I mean I don't think I've read a poem that knocked me off my feet like this one! Your descriptions and words were just mindblowing and I loved loved loved the flow of this!! In my book it deserves quite the higher number then 5!! but seeing how that is tbest on this site and this poem was the best...I give you a 5/5!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

OMG wow that was wow great poem....5/5 if i could put higher i would but cant...great job keep up the wonderful work....laura

Real good work you are one talented boy...Keep up the great work.
Xox Sherrie

Holy crap, I would give this poem 10/5 if I could. Geeze, it was just wow. The flow was gorgeous and the message was brilliant. You worded your poem with immense beauty and a powerful use of advances vocabulary. This poem, was it about cutting? That is my guess. Is this a poem about your past, or simply a topic you felt impressed to write about. This poem is very dear to be because of the life I have lived, and the life I live today. Brillant poem hun, a reall great job.

-Tainted Mikochan

I liked the word you used. very good! I really like it! 5/5!! all the way. I mean this was just an awsome poem! very well worded! great poem!

It was tiring to read this poem from start to end. The structure was just a mess. I suggest you revise it a bit, so it could be easily read. Again this seems more like a rap song more than a classic poem, not really my style. The words you used were most simple, and the rhymes were in an unknown structure, just being here and there. Can't say much beside try and revise it a little 3/5