Unsaid

by chris   Aug 18, 2005


Just one more day
one more moment
is all it would have took
why is it the important things
always go unsaid
the things that could
and should have been
the what ifs
run through my head
all i can think
is just one more day
one more moment
this time
i promise
those things wont go unsaid
i will scream and shout them
just come back
let me tell you how i feel
i cant take these emotions
building up inside of me
the things that could
and should have been
the what ifs
run through my head
just one more day
one more moment
is all it would have took
why is it the important things
always go unsaid

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  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    This question replays it's self over and over again
    every second of everyday through my thoughts and hopes.
    my life is one big trail of regrets and what ifs,
    they wear you down after a while.

    and thats why i enjoyed reading this one
    i love the way i can find something in each one of your poem where i can relate to it on my own level
    it takes true talent to produce such amazing universal poetry.

    **smile**

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Really nice poem...the flow was great!

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Certainly something I can relate to, as many can relate to I'm sure. It's true...so many things left unsaid, and often things that need to be said. I like it, the repetition works nicely, good flow. It's vague enough so that people can put themselves into it easily, thinking of the things they leave unsaid...

    Thank you for the comment. I love hearing people's thoughts...I'm glad you like the poem :)

    xxx

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