by Erica Nichole Aug 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
What is it about you? |
by Marie
Awww! this poem is awesome! You pain a picture of how this guy makes you feel and your doing a wonderful job! I love how you use all these things to describe the way you feel in the poem without saying "I love you" or "our love" or sumthing like that, but instead you just prove and state it at the end. That really ties the knot! Fabulous poem and keep up the great work! |