by myxlittlexcut Aug 18, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Rip me Apart |
Wow! That's amazing, in a bad way i guess, it's really scary that that kind of thing goes on in a country that claims to be so civilised, it really makes you stop and think. Well if a guy EVER hits you, even once, I think you should be out of that door! Amazing poem, thought provoking and well written. definitely 5/5 |
I am so proud of you for getting this poem published, i know how much it meant to you |
by Rhonda
Your poem is so graphic, i can imagine everything as i read it, and it almost brought me to tears. i gave it a 5/5 and i really don't know why your rating is 4.4 because your poem go hard (is excellent) |
That is so sad.. You should never let someone treat you like this.. Great poem |
by sierra
Hey you are a very talented writer i totally no how u feel in that poem i had to sit and watch my mom get beat up that was pretty hard so i feel for ya read sum of my poems sumtime kk *hugs n kisses* Sierra |