I love you poem it reminds me of my life and my love lol

I really don't know what to say... i have never loved someone enough to understand this poem fully... but you did a great job at getting your point across, nice work

*jackie*

This is a gr8 poem.you really good keep it up 5/5

Thanks for the comment on mine, and for recommending I read this one. It's really good. You really show the emotion well.
Sarah

Nice poem I liked it but in a way it makes me sad cause I seen that all Happen on my rez and its cool to see your keeping shit real I give you a 5 aight peace out you got ill skills

I am amazed with each and every poem you write.. i bet if you try to publish these.. they'll accept.. keep up the excellent work

Wow its like the others soo good i hope that i can write as good as u cone day

I gave you a five for this poem. its soo well written. and i totally understand what you mean, sometimes love can make you soo stupid. but it all seems worth it anyways. thanx for your vote and comment. *tiki*

Very strong Poem! Strong emotion and lots of pain... Very well written!

OMG DATS SO GREAT MAN UR GOOD i hearts it!!! could u read som of mine plz*blushes* lol

Hey you are a very talented writer i totally no how u feel in that poem i had to sit and watch my mom get beat up that was pretty hard so i feel for ya read sum of my poems sumtime kk *hugs n kisses* Sierra

That is so sad.. You should never let someone treat you like this.. Great poem

Your poem is so graphic, i can imagine everything as i read it, and it almost brought me to tears. i gave it a 5/5 and i really don't know why your rating is 4.4 because your poem go hard (is excellent)

I am so proud of you for getting this poem published, i know how much it meant to you

Wow! That's amazing, in a bad way i guess, it's really scary that that kind of thing goes on in a country that claims to be so civilised, it really makes you stop and think. Well if a guy EVER hits you, even once, I think you should be out of that door! Amazing poem, thought provoking and well written. definitely 5/5
Helen, and thanks for the comment on my poem by the way.