Love At First Sight

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Aug 18, 2005


From the moment I first saw you
I knew that love was what I felt
You looked at me with eyes of blue
And I thought that my heart would melt

You were standing in the doorway
Waiting for someone who wasn't me
I stood there with nothing to say
Wanting to shout out "Just be with me!"

But when you got what you came for
You turned around and left
And I just stood right by the door
For long after you left

When you came back the next day
To return whatever you had
I still had nothing to say
Although I wanted to so bad

I just wanted to say something
Anything, but still no words came out
You looked at me and said one thing
You said you wanted to take me out

Those words went straight to my heart
It was as though all my dreams had come true
Cuz I loved you from the start
Though these feeling for you, you never knew

When we went out that special night
I fell even more in love with you
Oh my gosh, you were such a sight!
How could I not know my love was true?

©2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 16 years ago

    by ilu

    Amazing poemm.....good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This wasn't too bad, but not my favorite. You use simple rhymes (but don't we all at some point)...try using different rhyming words..it gives you more variety and a better sound (Ex. Me, be, see, he...)

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Awwwww.......I love this poem so much!
    I loved the way you wrote it! I love it! And yeah I kno wat chu mean! It is just great!!!!!! Much love! Take care!

    Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by JessicaaSlater

    That guy sounds Great! he must be pretty amazing to have someone so awesome and tallented to write such a beautiful poem about.. it was a good poem just a found twice that you used the same words to rhyme like in the second paragraph you used "me" twice and in the third you did the same thing with "left".. i unno. i'm not a big fan of that but it didn't wreck it, it was still an overall great poem! awesome job! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    A sweet and touching poem..i was thinking forr a bit you werent gonna have him...well i like it..its happy..unlike many...great poem...keep it up!
    xxx

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