"You were standing in the doorway
Waiting for someone who wasn’t me
I stood there with nothing to say
Wanting to shout out “Just be with me!”

I didn't like how you rhymed "me" with "me"...that wasn't creative.

I like the poem except for one minute you're spelling out the whole word and the next you're cutting t off short.

Like "You" and "u"

It's just some minior mistakes. I like the poem though. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Hey, so sweet. Not like a wide-vocabulary poem or anything, but simple, cute and touching!

Good Writing!
beth

This is a cute poem, i can't relate so the emotion given in this poem dosn't deeply effect me but i really like the way you expressed yourself in such a regulated format everything seemed flawless rhymes and flow was perfect great job definatly a 5/5 poem

Yet, again A wonderful poem, absolutely love it. Great work hun, hope to see some more of your poems. ^___^

xoxMeg

Hey great poem! I loved it. You're a good writer, 5/5:)

Aw how sweet..i enjoy love poems...i like how i can relate to them most of the time..5/5

Cute poem. Good structure, rhyme, nothing to fault about it really. It's great x

Fabulous, I really enjoyed this

Another Great Poem. Well Done. Keep up the good work, and I hope u right many more like these last two i read.

Yours Sincerely

Andrew Brian Kirkman

Oh my god..this is sooo good it shows so much emotion and its kind of sad..i dunno if its supposed to be or not lol but it was REALLY good! 5/5 for sure!
Becky
xoxo

Awwww very cute poem, really sweet idea.
It flowed really well and was written beautifully, well done.

Thank for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

A sweet and touching poem..i was thinking forr a bit you werent gonna have him...well i like it..its happy..unlike many...great poem...keep it up!
xxx

That guy sounds Great! he must be pretty amazing to have someone so awesome and tallented to write such a beautiful poem about.. it was a good poem just a found twice that you used the same words to rhyme like in the second paragraph you used "me" twice and in the third you did the same thing with "left".. i unno. i'm not a big fan of that but it didn't wreck it, it was still an overall great poem! awesome job! 4/5

Awwwww.......I love this poem so much!
I loved the way you wrote it! I love it! And yeah I kno wat chu mean! It is just great!!!!!! Much love! Take care!

Cindy

This wasn't too bad, but not my favorite. You use simple rhymes (but don't we all at some point)...try using different rhyming words..it gives you more variety and a better sound (Ex. Me, be, see, he...)

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Amazing poemm.....good job!