Upon the Beach. 'war'

by wings.in.flight.   Aug 18, 2005


I closed My Eyes
The horror was too much
I wish this could all be lies
I was surrounded by rivers of blood.

Gunshots were being fired in all directions
I tried to get out of the water
On land i saw rolls of barbed wire placed in sections
I had to push past all the bodies.

Finally i made it ashore
I ran forward screaming
How fast my bullets tore
Killing countless people.

The ground shook and rumbled
Another grenade had gone off
My legs fell beneath me and i tumbled
I landed at the bottom of a hill.

Luckily it was a safe spot
I needed to get my head around this
Then there was another shot
My mate went down.

I tore forward with rage
Screaming with a massive heave
I chucked a grenade
This can't be happening.

Dawn slowly crept up
I was tired, I hadn't slept
I'm sick of crawling through this muck
I was just trying to survive.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow nice poem..extremely graphic.
    I dont know if u remember me..ut ive found u! lol
    I hope blake is going well.
    Much love
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good topic and words but you could still improve on the Flow.