When I'm With You

It was great! the flow was there and the rhyme was perfect, definately a 5.

I loved the middle stanza; it really stood out at me. Beautifully written love poem, you have described true love! Take Care! Brooke~

Nice... it gives me an idea for a poem of my own

Thats a lovely poem, really full of heartfelt emotion for this person, It's so nice that you feel this for someone, I liked the way you had written it, with the short lines, it really flowed well and wasn't forced at all, good work, take care and keep writing

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Awesome poem. good emotion, and very touching. keep it up!