by Darien
Awesome poem. good emotion, and very touching. keep it up! |
by katie!
Thats a lovely poem, really full of heartfelt emotion for this person, It's so nice that you feel this for someone, I liked the way you had written it, with the short lines, it really flowed well and wasn't forced at all, good work, take care and keep writing |
by Delo
Nice... it gives me an idea for a poem of my own |
by Brookeღ
I loved the middle stanza; it really stood out at me. Beautifully written love poem, you have described true love! Take Care! Brooke~ |
It was great! the flow was there and the rhyme was perfect, definately a 5. |