Comments : When I'm With You

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    Awesome poem. good emotion, and very touching. keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Thats a lovely poem, really full of heartfelt emotion for this person, It's so nice that you feel this for someone, I liked the way you had written it, with the short lines, it really flowed well and wasn't forced at all, good work, take care and keep writing

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  • 19 years ago

    by Delo

    Nice... it gives me an idea for a poem of my own

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I loved the middle stanza; it really stood out at me. Beautifully written love poem, you have described true love! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    It was great! the flow was there and the rhyme was perfect, definately a 5.