by Deathcanwait
thats right good! its slightly confusing, but i like a poem i have to think about. you right in a very impressive way too. i like a lot. |
by celi
good poem!keep it up |
by Livvie
awww that was really good!!!!!!keep up the good work!!!!~~~!!!! love you livvie |
Thanks for commenting on my poem Daniel. Much appreciation. This poem is very good. It has a good sence towards it, and i love it! |
by SEAN
Greaat poem |
by NICOLE
Thank u and i really like your poem |
Awww lovely poem, its truthful and bold, it has good morals and shows remorse, Nice work I want to hear what happened next xxx Please take a look at a few of mine |
by ZOMGEMO
Hey... that was a great poem... it had alot of feeling and emotion... keep up the good work... and if you have time, could you check some of mine out... thanks in advace... |
by *~* kelsey
Hey. that was super awesome! i loved it. i really liked the ending. it was awesome. and you write from the heart. which is good. it just makes you poetry ten times better. i love it. keep it up! 5/5~ |