Comments : I'm afraid

  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Hey great poem it truly expresses the anxiety of falling in love with a person and not knowing how to act because you are afraid of the inknown... i thought it was awesome.. the only thing i would have to say is in the part where it says

    I'm afraid to love you
    I'm afraid to fall
    coz if I do
    You might won't listen if I call.

    you might want to change the last line to " you might not listen if i call"..
    but other than that, i think its awesome! keep it up