WOW... I enjoyed that poem sooo much. its got so much power and meaning to it. keep up the good work.. i cant wait to read the rest of yours~

You did a GREAT job on this poem!

Wow thats really good keep it up!!! im learning romeo and juliet at school and its really goo i like the poem
lisha

WOW!!! YOU ARE A GREAT POET.THAT WAS SPLENDID, SPECTACULAR, ALL OF THEM REALLY GOOD WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was really good you chaanged the story and made it your own and thats hard to do keep it up 5/5

WOW...Awesome poem, it had so much meaning into. I Loved it so much! Check out some of my poems Please I would really like to know what u think about them. This poem was sooo G00D!!
~Smile Always~
Gina

That is so pretty. keep it up. but that is also very sad.

Wow i really liked this poem...the emotion was great and it was well written. i love the story of romeo and juliet and this put a perfect modern twist on it. nice job keep it up!!!

Sara

Great poem! 5/5! xxx

Awwwww so sad! but i loved it, thats really cute too, and it sounds like the real story...just reminds me of a happy story with a sad ending, i love those poems and u did a great job.

I love you? lol.haha. it's a great poem. wow...i mean...wow

OOOH MY GOD!!!! I RALLY N TRULY LOVED LOVED LOVED THAT POEM . It was so indepth and it came alive to me . 4 real it was like a movie wen i read it. YA got MAD lyrics . CHEC out my poems

Wow this was an amazing poem, definatly going to the favs. you portrayed a real love that everybody wishes they could have....you actaully made me cry!! lol if you have the chance please check out my poems.

Awwww thats so sad but u did a good job keep writin your really good

Wow *tear* that was beautiful.

O jeez! ur good! this made me cry!!! good job, hey if u got a chance please check out my poems, thanks.

kelli

That was an excellent poem, sadly i never heard the story Romeo and Juliet but i always wanted to and now that gave me a pretty good idea of what it is about

This is mind blowing, tear jerking and everything i realy don't know what else to say its fantastic keep up the good work this poem is wonderful

That was brillant i really enjoyed your poem keep it coming.

Could you read some of mines
And tell me what you think

I really liked this peom.... embarrising to say but i don't really know the story about romeo and juliet but i really like this