by Falling Up Aug 18, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Lost in denial of the pain of the past, |
by Dreams
You threw me in an emotional state now with the truths written behind these lines. The situation you mentioned occur so frequently in lives that many can relate to, but few truly learn. The last 3 lines kind of sum up the whole poem, nice work there. Wonderful display of emotions, I feel it. Thanks for sharing. =) |
Some Sentences Were Too Long, And Made The Poem Seem a Bit Off, Yet It Was Brilliantly Put For The Most Part, The Format Was Better Than The Other, Yet I Feel Like You've Picked The Wrong Category For This Poem xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
Damn you are soooo frick'n talented,,,,this poem touched me! keep it up lvoe . LISSA xox |
5/5 |
Gr8 poem again! thnx 4 the comment. yea that as 1 of my older n less good poems. thnx 4 takin the time 2 reed mine! i luv ur work. u got sum skills! |