Silence

by Falling Up   Aug 18, 2005


Lost in denial of the pain of the past,
and these feelings of you will always last
You’ve broken my heart, and shattered my soul,
the pain that you caused makes me loose my control.

I thought I didn't need to tell you how I felt inside
But you couldn't see the real truth
The real meaning,
Of where our friendship lied.

My heart was open, free to be broken,
I showed you how I felt deep inside.
To just be friends, I wanted a lot more,
My heart was in battlefield,
Taken by war.

I listened to my heart, and not my mind,
I couldn't see the truth, and how much I was blind.
If my heart was a book
Then you’ve skipped to the end
Not reading all the pages
See, I wanted to be more, than just your best friend.

I should have told you my feelings, my thoughts for you.
But now it’s too late, there’s nothing more I can do.
I must leave my compassionate feelings behind
From the beginning, I should’ve listened to my mind.

I loved you with everything, inside of my heart,
My entire universe has fallen apart.
I keep my feelings for you hidden again
Because I’ve lost you to my very best friend.

Spiteful words hurt your feelings, but silence breaks your heart,
Tell someone if you truly love them,
Before you get torn apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    You threw me in an emotional state now with the truths written behind these lines. The situation you mentioned occur so frequently in lives that many can relate to, but few truly learn. The last 3 lines kind of sum up the whole poem, nice work there. Wonderful display of emotions, I feel it. Thanks for sharing. =)

  • Some Sentences Were Too Long, And Made The Poem Seem a Bit Off, Yet It Was Brilliantly Put For The Most Part, The Format Was Better Than The Other, Yet I Feel Like You've Picked The Wrong Category For This Poem xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Damn you are soooo frick'n talented,,,,this poem touched me! keep it up lvoe . LISSA xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    5/5
    Good poem.
    And hey whats wrong with my picture =(
    love
    JP

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem again! thnx 4 the comment. yea that as 1 of my older n less good poems. thnx 4 takin the time 2 reed mine! i luv ur work. u got sum skills!
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