Great poem! Keep up the great work!! I like the fact that its concise yet very direct and open! 5/5

We'd be on a desert Island
Loving.....to survive
Living for the moment
Only you and I.

That stanza and the last one really caught my eye. This poem really does show how strongly you feel about that special someone and Ann he is so lucky to have your love! I am enjoying all your love poems so much they make me have the hugest smile when I'm done reading them because I love them!!
With Love and a 5,
~Chelsey~

His poem is very wonderful! You know it's really weird because I came across it before and I commented on it. Anyway, great job and I like the strong point in your poem! Keep up the great work!

O- i'm so sorry i didnt notice, but i didnt think that you were the one copying; i thought that somebody was copying you and was wondering if you were aware of it. Sorry again for the misunderstanding!
~Marianna

Another beautiful write Ann, I just don't know what to say. This piece is so heartfelt......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Passion and devotion...wow! The person this was written for is very lucky.

I love that very touching and momentus good job really inspiring work there - sorry i cant spell today - Anyway rather short and sweet Keep it up! Please comment and vote on some of mine

I loved your peom it provided me with a great picture of two in love and knowing that they would be together forever.

Ann, that was so beautiful, I want to live in fantasyland too. Superbly written poem, with such a peaceful feel of true love! Take Care! Brooke~

I often live in a dream world but i love it - It's a nice place - lol. It was written with so much feeling and you easily get an image into your head when reading it. Oh how i do love reading love poems, they cheer me up cos the lad i liked alot is messing me about so i feel kind of lonely and upset right now :)

Oh wow..that is very very good..great job. i like this..it is very pretty...5/5...good job..

xoxoxoxo,
Crystal

I love it. It makes your mind wander. I do that alot.

Pete