Comments : Box

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    Another great poem!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Wow. Excellent poem. The word choice and flow were extremely well done. I loved the ending and the descriptions. Great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kezza

    Very wicked descriptive poem. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow.
    "on the floor there is a box
    all around are my secrets and thoughts
    you pick them up, and put them in
    when you left me, i opened it again..."
    i loved that part. you know i gave you a 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    WOW i love it it is so good. It is exactly how I feel right now. I put all my things in a "box" to hide everything from everybody so nobody sees my hurt and pain that i go through NO i don't cut myself either. But I really liked the poem