by Falling Up Aug 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
(early work of mine when i first started writing) |
by LadyPearl
Interesting comparison, try not to repeat too much, keep it up |
by Jamie
This isnt as good as your new work but the metaphor you used here is insanly brilliant....like really your a very creative person 5/5 |
by Christina
Wow i really understand wat your going for in this poem! ur good at writing keep it up! these are the kinda poems that you replace lyke you and him..with cat n mouse..even tho it sounds different it still gets thru to peoples heads! your really good! |