Aww hun, so sad, yet so beautiful (as always)... you're so talented. keep it up! |
Aww hun, that's so sad, yet beautiful (as always)... you're so talented. keep it up! |
by DevilWithin
That was really nice i liked alot..I like how you write----Rachel |
Again, amazing poem. I feel bad if this happened/happens to anyone....great job.. |
by XxTeArSxX17
Wow this was sad everyone she loved left her and she still made it. thats show's she strong i liek that keep it up 5.5 |
by Mark Coates
Nice one very gd |
by april
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L |
by Greedy
It brought tears to my eyes...beautiful. |
by Kogila Kanni
Wow! was very touchin! very nice.. i enjoyed it ya! write more ya! :) |
Aww..this is sad:(, very well written, but very sad...I hope it's not true, but if it is, im deeply sorry. thank you for the comment on my poem, you are a gifted writer as well...keep writing!~ |
by Tess
That made me cry |
Wow wow and more wow i feel like crying this poem ismind blowing and you say you are no good you need your head seeing too |
by kay tee
Keep it up! thats really good! n thanks for commentin on my poems 2 |
Good poem 4/5 it was a good story but i didnt catch onto the flow... maybe its just me?? good poem tho keep writing! |
Aww omg this makes me cry hun, this is so sad I dont know where it came from if it actually happened to you then im so sorry, it hurts to lose people you love I know but hang in there, theres a plan for all of us hun, you have HUGE talent keep it up cannot wait to read more from you, lubb you |
by Jimmy Dao
Love how you wrote it |
Wow that was really deep, and very well written, Nice, u have talent on written, keep it up, bye |
O god babes, ne1 would think u had a heart if they read this poem, @ least i know the truth. nah seriously gd poem |
by april
THE BEST POEM EVER |