Thats a really good poem!!!! i loved reading it!!! great job!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

You're really a spectacular poet...amazing imagery and just beautifully done.... this is one my fave parts:
"Beneath my eyes I can see your amazing smile
That made me never want to fall into sleep
Because I was living a reality better than any dream
Before your voice was the one slowly killing me"

Especially the last two lines ^^ Excellent!

xxx

Wow... im in awe. wow... you're so talented. keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

Yea, that does kind of go better... I kind of changed it like that, but with my own little twist on it. Thank you for the suggestion, bob. I like it when people give good advice : )

♥Niki