Very good... strong emotions and extremely powerful. Great job!

Usually I don't like internet slang poems, however this is a nice change from what I usually read in this category. I liked the first four lines best, they flow on well.

Hey .... i luved dis poem, 5/5 mayb u just need 2 give ur friend time? time duz sometimes heal wounds! im always here 4 u if u need s0me1 2 talK 2 s0o dnt ever f0rget that~! thanx 4 ur comment it meant a lot!! luv maddison xxx