by e LIZ a beth
LOVING IT!!!!!!haha i luve u becca...haha and i love how great u are at writting |
Wow i like ur poem, i can relate :-) good job! |
by Cella Bella
This one was really good too. All of your poems carry so much emotion in every line. though this is really sad, you wrote it very well. 5/5 |
Long poem, but very good. I can understand it completely. A very good write; you can feel all the emotion in it. Good job. |
by Marinell
I feel exactly the same.. its so hard.. i love your poem.. sigh.. |
by Jenni
I thought that this was such a sad and touching poem. You did a wonderful job describing your emotions toward this situation and I felt as though it was happening to me. great job. 5/5 |