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by Caroline Aug 19, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
I cant believe hes doing this deep breath deep breath what is he saying? deep breath deep breath we cant be over deep breath deep breath hes walking away deep breath deep breath how can he leave me deep breath deep breath i cant believe i let him go deep breath deep breath and now the tears come. just trying out a new style of writing you tell me What u think!
by Dana
It is definitely not something that i have seen before and i really like it!! you used it very well!
by CHOKE
I think this was an awesome style hun...it was different, i luffed this poem 5/5! *elizabeth*
