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I really like this poem. It is deep. There were a few moments when it didn't flow smoothly though. I got lost a little in some parts. If i could sugest in your next poem reading it in the point of view of another person. But i really liked it. My favorite line is "Still yearning, every second
Begging to be with you
Because forever and always
I don't want to be through"
Keep writing I love it i gave your rate a 4/5

You had some good lines but i felt some had too many syllables so it disrupted the flow. The title matched the poem and was good because it was the idea behind the poem but didn’t give away the last line which is important. My favourite stanza was :

"I poured my heart
Right into your soul
Slowly our lips linked
And we became whole"

It portrayed some magnificent emotion and worded perfectly. I felt the idea behind the poem you truly had a grasp on which helped portrait what you felt. Good work.

Ahhhh, that was a really great poem. i like the way that u described ur feelings, at the time.i can truly realate, because i know excatly how it feels. if u feel like it u should read my poem *shadow* thanx
5/5
*keep smiling*
`~*Tessa*~`

I really like the flow of this poem. It's very touching. Keep up the good work, I gave it a 5. :)

WOW! This was so beautiful! It flowed sooooo well and everything was just perfect! I loved this line:
"I poured my heart
Right into your soul"

AMAZING WORK! I loved it!
~*hAiLy*~