Disfigured

by edsel   Aug 19, 2005


Day1:
walking on the street head down
somebody hied, but still frown
stupid life, unfair to me
i failed again the truth to see

day2:
scribbling on chicken notes
words from disfigured thoughts
noticed not a tear falls
dark room and sadness crawls

day3:
sip a little cold coffee
break some plate momma sees
she scowls stupid little creep!'
locks the room of oven heat

day4:
black eyes hurting ribs
stop pls' poppa still kicks,
mouth bleeds head spins
'got u want boy' poppa grins

day5:
dragged, basement new place
there's blood on my face
smile no longer hurt
no sun, no rain, no grace

day6:
no lights, no air, not complaining
stiff and cold and alone
rats, roaches, and spiders dancing
smile a little i am home

day7:
A BODY OF A BOY, WHO NO
LONGER LOOKED LIKE HE HAD ONE
WAS FOUND ON AN EMPTY HOUSE...
REUTERS.

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Nice set up...terrible those sort of things happen...but you created the picture well...

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Well...jsut wanna say sorry I haven't been able to e-mail you, but I promise I will, I love your poems. Really nice job, hope you keep writing poems like this! take care and be good! lol...talk to you soon!

  • 19 years ago

    by juggalette_4_life

    Wow I like how you had the whole poem set up

  • 19 years ago

    by kitten

    Loved it hun good job i really felt it