That was really well written. it made me sad. any poem that can actually make somone have a feeling that they werent haveing before they read it deserves a 5. great job.

Very emotional poem, very touching, 5/5

That was awesome. It had a good emotional background. As well as it was intense. Good Work.

-Jennifer.

So so great! u are talented!

I wish that a guy would tell me some of the first things u said up there.. i think that guy has a big head to have a thrown.

Sweet .... i know how u feel.... good and very blunt...i like you u dont beat the bush when i comes to things like that. keep ur chin up... stay sweet...

much love always,
ur new friend becca

Great poem... I like the repitition... Drives the point home... Check ouot mine "one second"

Men are such... i cant swear on here but obviously you kno!! good poem, 5/5
take care

Great poem Well done :]

Wow what a beautiful master piece
ya deserve 10/5 votes for this one bj

This is a great poem i really liked it i thought it was going to be a am sry am sry that would have been good but i really like how u put a twist on it
keep it up!5/5

AWWWW girl im sry:( yyea i k now its hurst

Nice poem, i liked it, made me sad a little but thats ok. keep up the good work. Huggles R

Hey this poem is so CooL :)

This is such a great poem, if u need 2 talk im here......im talking 2 u in the chatroom....i hope your ok coz u sound upset luv always maddison

I like your poem and voted and now i am going to comment your poem really makes cents and i relly like it you could read mine and tell me wht you think.

Excellent !!! 5/5 !!! i cant remember having read a better poem.... is one of the nicest poems.. leep it up

Sad abd good you met someone else

Thats so good but sad

LUV LJ

Wow BJ, Awsome poem. I loved it. Very touching. Keep up the good work.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~