by Viper
Bloody good poem, sorry you got hurt by that jack ass, hope you find your special someone, and yeah you are alive and kicking lol |
by Becca
Wow, tht was so sad and powerful. i nearly cried!! ur such a great poet! |
Awwh. Thats really sad :( |
Bj thats a really good poem i like it alot....i can relate to it...keep it up! |
by Ali
Wow! very nice poem, Keep it up 5/5!!! |
Wow that was REALLY good and touching keep up the GREAT work!! you have a great talent keep using it!! |
Awww...its so sweet....:( i really like it bj..It reminds me of someone i know..Who hates me..Well i really like it keep p the good work hun |
by void.
The harsh contrast between what is said and what should be said makes and interesting study. I like the parallel syntax of the "I'm sorry…/ I'm sorry…" and the "I hate…/ I hate…" halves of the poem. Great emotion, but not so strong on diction; i.e, I got what you were saying, and it came across loud and clear, but you used very common words to describe the feelings. This may be good or bad, depending on perspective. Good poem and keep writing! |
Realy powerful i love it you went deep dont at the poet in you swarm your words |
by Heidi
Whoever did that to you is an ASS... but you did an amazing job on writing.. all your poems are amazing.. You're really good at writing and i hope to hear more soon.. =D |
by kkly
Dont give up on love.. |
by nadsyy
Dat was gwd it made me cry (i'm very emotional ) lol anyway i enjoyed dat wel done mwa...luv ya xoxox |
by amelia
I enjoyed reading this poem |
by Truest Lies
Brilliant! I loved the rhyme...and the intense feelings that roamed about during the entire poem. Nice! |
by Jamie
This is great it's so creative and it's worded perfectly, thats what he should have said and he said all the oppostie to me too!!!!!!!! i know how you feel!!! i love this 5/5 |
by Atomic
Yeah, I like who it switched from "I'm sorry" to "I hate you". |
by Megann Lee
Woah! Wonderful poem, sounds like somethng my ex sorta did and said. =\ |
by the middle
Great poem!!! |
by x Saiya
Good job, I give it 5/5 :) |
I like the one line(I’m sorry that I led you on, |