Wow...Honestly...its good, it isn't u'r best...I think you tried to make it rhyme too much instead of just let the emotion flow out of you...Poem aren't just things that rhyme... True poetry is thoughts on paper and your whole life in words... Good job...

Xoxo,
Kayla

Omg that is so sad. Isn't it funny how guys always have the meanest way of breaking up. I hope everything has gotten better for you guys.

Great poem mate...very appealing and straight forward to read with a good flow..keep it up!
xxx

Really good poem! i love the way everything is set up and flowing all the same way and then everything just reverses. it was a good twist! 5/5

Wow.. you are very talented.. this poem is very well written also! i liked how you did a comparison of what you hear and what you should've heard.. very emotional indeed. i can tell you work hard it shows thru =) strong words and a deep meaning keep it up =)

--emotionless19*

This is soo sad.....but i do love this poem.

Mallori

Love it!...sad though...

Girl You Are So Right! This Poem Is Preaching To The Choir, I Definatley Feel This Way Right Now, I'm Going Through Alot Of Drama With An "Ex" Boyfriend And I Know How Much I Wish He'd Say These Things Too But Hes Just Not Man Enough To...Strong Poem, Strong Point, Strong Words...
Talented Writer 5/5
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

That was very harsh and I hope that NEVER even happened to you, because THAT would hurt. This poem was very deep and very good. Keep it up hunn.

>black&&blue

Not my favorite, but I loved the topic and meaning. I can relate very well, only in a with my friends instead of a guy...Does that make sense to you? Well, great job anyways.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Instead of making me sad it made me angry! What a jerk Glad all guys aren`t like that. Although I`ve met a few who thought they deserved a throne. Do what any queen should do open the drawbridge just as he gets to the top! luv ya! All your poems that I`ve read I really like.

Wow this is really good and I can relate to this poem so much. 5/5

YOU HAVE A TALENT I LOVED YOUR POEM...REMINDS ME OF WHAT I SHOULD HAVE SAID TO MY EX...VERY STRONG...KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND YOUR POEMS FLOWING..

Very touching

I like this poem so angr! RAWR!

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