by Sherry Lynn Aug 19, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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by Nix
Very deep and imagery is great. You expressed emotions excellently, well done! This piece has superb atmosphere, it deserves 5/5 |
by Rachel RTVW
What an excellent metaphor. The flow was great and the message was an inspiration. I hope that sharing your grief may help others who can relate to these issues. Great job! |
by David
A nature poem, yet its more. there is more to it. i loved how you wrote a poem where the reader could choose which way the poem can be read. well done! |
by Brittany C
Beautiful poem. i could almost feel the storm. 5/5 |
by Carrotgirl
Dont like love poems so I read your nature poem makes you shiver as if your there |