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LOL... Bob, you are so good!

This poem was so heartfelt, and emtional.. and so.. i dont know. it spoke to me. no it screamed to me!! truly amazing poem,. and it was on the top list, but i had to cut it down to 5.. but it really is an amazing poem..
5/5

x.x;Lauren

Dont like love poems so I read your nature poem makes you shiver as if your there

Beautiful poem. i could almost feel the storm. 5/5

A nature poem, yet its more. there is more to it. i loved how you wrote a poem where the reader could choose which way the poem can be read. well done!

5/5 david

What an excellent metaphor. The flow was great and the message was an inspiration. I hope that sharing your grief may help others who can relate to these issues. Great job!

Very deep and imagery is great. You expressed emotions excellently, well done! This piece has superb atmosphere, it deserves 5/5