Well, I know it's a bit lame to comment on your own poem., It's just I wish you like my very first poem. :)

Hey, thanks for your comment. i love the last four lines, they sum up the poem perfectly! hope to see more of your poems soon. tanya xoxo

Wow a very hartfelt poem m'dear, and yes you probably did do the right thing. good job i really liked the style and literary uses.
Linds