by Marie Aug 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You looked me in my eyes, |
Loved it. |
by SARAH
I love this poem and you have definately convinced me to add you to my favorites! it describes how i'm feeling right now perfectly! keep up the good work! 5/5! :) |
by jamie25
X-cellent write! been there done that one..keep up the good work! |
by Kristen
I am impressed with this piece, very nice flow and natural rhyme.. the contradictory actions make for a good stanza..deep and insightful..great job |
by pirateRAWRR
Hey your poem was really good. i could really relate to it and im sure others can to keep up the good work =] |