This is much better.. i can feel your agony and pain.. perfect! but i hope that this isnt really a true thing... if it is im sry.. keep up the great work tho
take care of you
amanda

I like the first line :) its so true!

I enjoyed this, you could really feel all the emotions you were going through in the poem, I hope that everything goes alright for you, well done to you and good work
xx

Love the way u pt emotion in ur poems well odne

Wow Deangelo babez thats so good