Omg i loved it!! that was a great write hunn keep writing i look forward to reading more :) take care! |
That was SO GOOD...that is defentiely a 5-5.... |
I love this poem...omfg......keeep it up...Xox.......Hind |
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I'm confused by your poem it so different in each line i love it though is it suposed to give a confused feeling? |
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Another awesome poem! i loved it!! |
Grabbed me from the begiing to the end, cause I can really relate to this one.....You did an excellent job with the flow and rhyming, very emotional and deep...perfect!!! |
Beautifully done...I relate to that so much....and the flow is excellent....I love this....I pretty much feel the same way.... |
Always remember you're not alone. I can relate to this poem more than most people can believe. I look forward to more poems like this! |
This is a very good poem and i can really relate to it alot. keep up the great work. |