Awww!!! hah i loved this poem!

Good poem.it is very well writen.keep up the good work

Freaking-dang!...
Your good..and i like but it made me sad:(

Much better then anything i can do great job!

DAMN STRAIGHT.
i love you kiddo!

Thats so sweet, peace and respeack

It's got all of the emotion that you'd expect from a lost love poem, but the rhymes seem forced. like you sat there thinking "Hmmm what rhymes with there? Unaware sounds cool" and then decided that you had to fit in in somehow.