It is good, i can se how the size might put sum people of reading it, but apart from that,i likedtheideas and the imagery in it

It was awesome really liked it...I give u major props WHOOT WHOOT *HIGH FIVE* lol but any way I really liked ur poem

Wow that was so good... you're a woderful writer...

keep writing..
Love,
Ipsita

Your a really good writer .....better then me.......which is no surprise but i really like this poem it's great

Wow thats amzing you are seriously gifted xox

This is a great poem. You are a great writer!

Just reread it and iliked it even morethan the first time. Its really really very good. It gets better towards the end as well

Wow. This is a beautiful piece of art. I will put it up on my wall. I love the way you wrote it, and I can relate to it intensly. I'm sorry that I didn't read it sooner, and that I've been sort of blowing you off. I love you're poem. So much passion, so much talent.

Excellent Job

DFK

Wow that was a great poem and i also can realte to it. you are a great writer dont let anyone tell you other wise. keep it up...luv and huggs...missy

There's lot to life than pain addiction.. i hope what you dream never comes true.. but the poem was good, though melancholic in its tone

Great poem, girl, i really did like it a lot.

I luv that it was very touching keep it up

Dude i know how u feel! great poem!