It...Burns....

by undying blusher   Aug 20, 2005


My punishment?
I’m burning already
Not waiting till damnation?
He’s already chosen
I had no choice in the matter
Yet I am supposed to have the choice to change
To repent in my heart and in my actions
But He has already made up His mind
He already knows who goes and who stays
Who’ll be with Him?
Who’ll be burning beneath Him?
S’pose it will be much worse then
But it feels like torture
And almost every day
It’s like hell
In my face
Consuming my body as well now
For years I have been burning
My punishment?

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  • 14 years ago

    by undying blusher

    What the hell, I'm not going to repent. I did nothing wrong. I didn't put this chronic pain onto myself.

  • 19 years ago

    by chris

    I really like this poem of the ones i read of yours i like this the best. in my opion heaven and hell is whatever you make. so make it. i can relate to your feelings in this poem to. the thought of not knowing and not being good enough, but life is life and if you truely believe in all that stuff then its like he already knows what you are gonna do so how can he truely get mad at you. just my thoughts on it. good job

  • 19 years ago

    by the-last-one

    I think that you still have a chance
    to repent and love God. He loves you and wants you to be with him and you can be, you just have to make the change if you ever want to talk e- mail me.
    much love and Godbless,
    erica*

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    From: rabson@comcast.net
    Timestamp: 2005-04-09 05:03:04 GMT
    In reply to: It Burns
    Message:

    ...I came and read IT BURNS and this is what I thought:

    Punishment is not what the world has intended,
    Its a test a trial,
    For your survival,
    It is made to show you,
    The greater things you may never have seen,
    Like the really cold days,
    Where most freeze,
    Being that I am one who knows cold,
    I love the weather where most go home,
    I stand in it waiting for the day to come,
    When someone else will wait with till the snow storms done,
    So punishment no,
    Thats not what it is,
    It is a trial of strength,
    To see if you really want to live!

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hmmmm, It dosn't really float my boat(lol I love that phrase)
    The flow wasn't that good and I didn't really enjoy reading it..
    Its a good idea, but could be worked on.

    Im sorry but thats my honest opinion.

    x)

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