Thought it was VERY good but you put "quiet" in some parts where it should have been "quite" just so you know, but anyways great job, 5/5

Another great poem that's well thought out. I loved it !!!
xxx cici xxx

I dont get why you would win either way...but i think i get the rest of the poem good job i know what its like to be inna fight with my friends and it seems like their my only friends so all i do is sit in my room and yeah it sucks but this a great poem expressing that feeling great job