Wow, this was great!
Its so true I really loved this part "when magazines sell bodies,
and pictures own a girl's heart,"
its so true and sad how it works out.
the flow was really good in this I really enjoed reading it.
Wow so many parts I just loved,"When words are written in flesh,
Before they're written in stone,"

The whole poem was written great well done and keep it up x)

Wow, this was another very good poem on a big issue, the way that so many people lose their virginity because supposedly it is the only way to happiness, this was another superd poem from you, I will be sure to take a look at some more from you, I have enjoyed reading these, well done to you, I can tell from these two that you are talented...

take care
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This was a really good poem. Please comment back if you can

I Admire The Format And Your Strong Message 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

That was great.and so true.i know some and know of some girls that have had babies before they were 13.it's so sad.
Great poem and tells alot about how some girls are.
keep writing.
Tes

Wow thats soo true you should submit that to the tv and they can put it on an add, thatd convince more ppl to think about wat theyre doing

Great Poem! I loved it, your an excellent writer!