by No Motiv? Aug 20, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The ceiling lights flicker |
by katie!
Wow, I must say I've been stunned out of my highness with this poem, its like a jerk to reality and I have to say what a brilliant write, I liked the way you made a big issue into a story which really wrenched my heart and made me feel quite teary and emotional, that was brilliant explanations of feelings, I really really enjoyed that, very well done to you, I loved these lines the most |