Wow, I must say I've been stunned out of my highness with this poem, its like a jerk to reality and I have to say what a brilliant write, I liked the way you made a big issue into a story which really wrenched my heart and made me feel quite teary and emotional, that was brilliant explanations of feelings, I really really enjoyed that, very well done to you, I loved these lines the most

"fear fails to keep his company
what's risk when he's already lost it all?"

As I suppose that is a terrible state of mind to be in, whats risk when hes already lost it all, it would be terrible to live with thoughts like that..

Well done once again and keep up the good work

take care
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