Wonderfully written.
please read my poem "Life".
much love,
marjan

I like this poem, it doesnt seem corny, it seems realistic. its emotional, and cool, good job(;

This is a really really good poem, I can also relate to it. Thanks so much for your comment.

-Amanda B (Ionlywant2beMe)

I know what you mean!! i go through the same thing!!
amanda

Pretty good, The first part was nice. Then the flow started to be a bit shaky. Thanks for your comment

Hello sweet,

This is a lovely poem, obviously written from the heart, accounting for your feelings at the time of writing. That's what makes good poetry - not rhyme or complex words, but depth and emotions. Nice work.xx

Thankyou so much for the comment it makes me want to keep writing and i need the encouragement so thank you once again.
i read this poem and it touched me in a way that was wonderfull u have alot of tallent and i hope u dont mind i put you in my favorites
keep up the wicked work
and hun keep in there!
lots of love
chyenne
5/5

I liked this poem. It wasn't corny, it was how you felt!

-Taylor

A very good poem indeed. Just lovely. Very powerful and emotive. Keep it up

This is very well written I loved it... keep up the good work!

It was a good poem, as long as you get your feelings out and say what you needed to say, that's all that matters, and you did that wonderfully ^^ and thnx for commenting my poem, much appreciated!

Thanks for commenting on my poem :)
i really liked this poem and all the rest of your writing...you put alot of your feelings in them and thats something that makes them even better. i hope to see some more of your work soon.